Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Blog 2: Close Reading of Poetry








 Siren Song by Margaret Artwood

This is the one song everyone
would like to learn: the song
that is irresistible:            Diction is pulling the reader in (“irresistible”)

the song that forces men                Imagery enforces the scene in which the author is portraying
to leap overboard in squadrons           Definition: warships used during war
even though they see beached skulls

the song nobody knows
because anyone who had heard it
is dead, and the others can’t remember.
    Shift in tone- from mysterious and intriguing to boredom
Shall I tell you the secret
and if I do, will you get me
out of this bird suit?            Sympathizing with the enemy    , use of rhetorical question

I don’t enjoy it here
squatting on this island
looking picturesque and mythical       Refers to the mythical tale, The Odyssey

with these two feathery maniacs,    Makes narrator sound pitiable and misunderstood
I don’t enjoy singing
this trio, fatal and valuable,

I will tell the secret to you,
to you, only to you.             Trying to gain trust of the audience, to make them feel special
Come closer. The song

is a cry for help: Help me!                  Punctuation adds to the tone shift of desperation
Only you, only you can,
you are unique

at last. Alas                                 Tone shift--content, satisfactory
it is a boring song
but it works every time.                Conniving, dark humor; listener ends up the same way as the rest do